专四写作(专四写作真题范文)

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英语专业四级写作如何拿高分？

1、四级120-150字；六级150-180字；

2、是否长短句交叉；

3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：来源：

www.examda.com

1、适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.

2、善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…

3、一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。

ComputerandIBySimmy

Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.

exceedingly替换very

thrilling替换exciting

sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

google替换search

anarmyof替换alotof

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；

Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular

Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达"与…一致"的意思，替换With…

Advancement替换development

Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto

Current(currently)替换now

Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople

Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的

Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.

Forastart替换Tobeginwith

Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法

ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动

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